tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2627087808515867619.post6611631643095916938..comments2010-02-27T13:11:28.905-06:00Comments on The Horned Devil: The Job - Short StoryTzalaranhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13963885897844823252noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2627087808515867619.post-50194629720567773772010-02-27T13:11:28.905-06:002010-02-27T13:11:28.905-06:00Interesting indeed. I would see this as a "se...Interesting indeed. I would see this as a "separate" or "add-on" to the main story. This sub-story really helped me get more into the character. I understand his mentally more and more. I like it. Good job!JVnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2627087808515867619.post-71573939070300877922010-02-23T22:38:56.089-06:002010-02-23T22:38:56.089-06:00Very interesting story! It was a little tough to u...Very interesting story! It was a little tough to understand the setting or characters as I don't know much of the back ground story. The detail you put into the current situation really allowed me to visualize the situation and environment. There are some missing punctuation within the story. Just some missing periods, etc. Otherwise, great job! I'd be interested in reading more!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11430045619599505264noreply@blogger.com